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Teasing Zazu

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Nala: Is he following us?
Simba: Yes! Quick, run!

Zazu: give me back my feather! >:B


:D heheh comments are appreciated

Critique anybody? :U
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Simba's face is uneven as is Nala's but it's less noticeable. Nala's body gets progressively smaller as you go from head to toe. I can see that you wanted to show movement but Nala's hind legs look like her pelvis is tilted, this movement only happens when making a turn while running but this turn would crash her right into Simba's side. That said, I love the way the grass is blended from bg to foreground & the pads on Nala's paws are adorable. I love the feather from Zazu (I can't get feathers right).
This is meant as the constructive critism you asked for & let me assure you that I wouldn't even bother if I didn't like your art, if I didn't think you had talent ok?
Damej